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Sitting among so many
Their words slowly dissapear
the coldness around me subsides
my mind imagining you here

Arms stop shaking from the cold
lips parted in a tender smile
heart no longer aching
happiness has come for a little while

When my trance has ended
reality sneaks cruelly inside
words crashing down in a torrent
without you here I abide

Missing you so strongly
your words and touch I need most
I breathe in the cold air around me
reality is my unwelcome host
©2006-2009 ~addicted2pjs
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It was very cold last winter when I wrote this. I was sitting with a group of friends out in the cold. My thought started to wander around relationships and I couldn't help but write it.
Please enjoy!

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wow. beautiful.

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Thank you.

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very nice..i can relate to this...

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This is really amazing! Great job.

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Thanks! :)

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You're welcome.

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When you've seen beyond yourself then you may find, peace of mind is waiting there. And the time will come when you see we're all One, and life flows on within you and without you.
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Wow this is really powerful. Thank you

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this shit is strong, I swear, the reality is my unwelcome host."

Creative Writing!

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